Excellent. You have a talent to show the moment and characters. You had me guessing to the end. Great forward motion, which must be challenging given that backseats are so cramped : ) I look forward to part 2.
Wow, Annieguile, your storytelling is absolutely captivating! You’ve managed to take us deep into Ezra’s mind, painting a vivid picture of obsession and unraveling emotional dynamics. The pull between him and Noelle is intense, with layers of tension that keep readers like me hooked.
I especially admire how you’ve crafted Ezra’s character—his inner turmoil feels so raw and authentic, and the moments between him and Noelle are charged with complexity. It’s intriguing how Noelle remains elusive, adding to her mystique while leaving us questioning her motivations.
Looking forward to Part 2 and seeing just how far Ezra’s unraveling goes. Your ability to capture raw emotion and the lies we tell ourselves makes this story truly compelling. Keep up the amazing work!
Intoxicating at all levels. I wish I could restack every sentence. Gee, Annie, that was wild, I'm directly heading for part 2.
Thank you Laz!!! For your kind words and for reading!!
My pleasure, truly.
It’s been five minutes since I finished and I’m still on my toes
Outdone yourself! Absolutely devoured this
The way things pace and flow is just incredible and the narration had me absolutely choked up
Excellent. You have a talent to show the moment and characters. You had me guessing to the end. Great forward motion, which must be challenging given that backseats are so cramped : ) I look forward to part 2.
Thank you for reading!! 🫶🫶🫶
I hope I deliver til the end.
This was good. I find I end up skimming when I read longer pieces here. But I didn't. I read every word.
Wow, Annieguile, your storytelling is absolutely captivating! You’ve managed to take us deep into Ezra’s mind, painting a vivid picture of obsession and unraveling emotional dynamics. The pull between him and Noelle is intense, with layers of tension that keep readers like me hooked.
I especially admire how you’ve crafted Ezra’s character—his inner turmoil feels so raw and authentic, and the moments between him and Noelle are charged with complexity. It’s intriguing how Noelle remains elusive, adding to her mystique while leaving us questioning her motivations.
Looking forward to Part 2 and seeing just how far Ezra’s unraveling goes. Your ability to capture raw emotion and the lies we tell ourselves makes this story truly compelling. Keep up the amazing work!
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Oh, the Meg Myers sealed the deal for me. *swoon!* Always with the good musical anchors. 🤍🔥